Elevator pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JPVi5cnsiq8
Reflection/Feedback:
Since I did not do either of the first two elevator pitches, I did not
receive any feedback. I have done elevator pitches in the past though
and some of the feedback I have received I tried to implement when doing this
final elevator pitch. This feedback includes not memorizing exactly what you
are going to say, while I had a good idea and main points I wanted to touch upon,
I did not memorize every word. This makes it feel more like a real conversation
rather than a robot saying what was needed. I also practiced a couple of times
in the mirror before actually recording myself. This helps me to try out seem
different ways of saying things and to watch myself speak. Practicing in the
mirror before made it easier for me when it came to actually videotaping myself.
Hey Danielle! Good job on the elevator pitch. I thought your pace and hand motions helped enhance the product overall. Making sure you do not sound robotic and just hitting your main points is important so that you do not lose the interest of your listeners. I wish that I had other elevator pitches of yours to compare it to since this is the last one. Hope this benefitted you and helped you to prepare for an actual pitch.
ReplyDeleteWow, I must say that the fact that this was your first elevator pitch is amazing. The way your enunciate your words is remarkable and it truly makes you seem like a business woman I would like to do business with. Of course, the idea you are selling also appeals to me, and I am overall a big fan of this pitch. Overall, very well done and love the idea!
ReplyDelete